Week 8 Comments and Feedback

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Overall I think they feedback I've been getting is good! They have useful suggestions that I have used to improve my writing. As for my comments, I think they are also productive. I definitely take away some tips and ideas from reading other peoples stories. I feel like generally I've interacted with almost everyone in the class in one way or another. Going forward, I think I should work on time mostly with my comments. I tend to leave them until the last minute and I think they would be more productive if I spent some more time on them.

You can learn from criticism

I chose this picture because I think criticism is an important part of feedback and it is especially important to learn to take the criticism well and use it constructively.

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